wow, the coloring looks fantastic. those hair skin tones turned out great (I think skin and hair are the hardest things to paint). The background is lovely...there's enough going on to make it interesting, but it's not overly detailed or busy. It really compliments the figures in that sense.

The only thing I really don't like is the composition. I feel like there should be more below the canvas, like the viewer should be able to see more of their upper torso. The way that they're cut off, they kind of look like they're floating in front of the foreground. Hope that makes sense.